Intangible: Flash Fiction

Intangible: Flash Fiction

This is my guest entry for the flash fiction contest at Lascaux Flash.

Intangible

She writes her number on the back of my hand with a black magic marker.

Then she says hello.

We dance the way people at parties dance, a fast slow dance of an excuse to press our bodies together, to what passes for music at these types of things. Stuck in the middle with you.

When she speaks, she leans in close, the black tips of her blonde hair tickling my face, her hand soft on my shoulder.

I’ve read when a girl is really into you, she’ll take any chance to make physical contact.

I’ve only read.

I fetch her a drink, standing in line for an eternity, glancing her way, worried should she leave my sight she will disappear, ethereal.

I return.

I don’t go here, she says, between sips of her beverage. I’ll transfer, I say, joking, but not really.

With nods and a smiles, my friends leave. Her friends linger, inspecting me as they embrace her goodbye.

Time passes. We find our way into the cold.

Our night ends at the threshold of her friend’s building. Call me as soon as you wake, she says.

I tell her this is not the end of our tale. She nods.

I spend the remainder of the night in my bed, watching the minutes flick by.

Morning light peeks through the yellowing blinds of my bedroom and I clutch my phone, finding myself paralyzed by the idea of blemishing the perfect of yesterday with the unknown of tomorrow.

Douglas Adams’ Birthday

Douglas Adams’ Birthday

Yesterday was Douglas Adams’ birthday and I totally missed it. In my defense, I don’t think he’ll mind.

Anyway, I thought I’d make up for missing his birthday by posting just a couple of Douglas Adams related things I came across yesterday.

First, Douglas featured on his very own Google Doodle yesterday.

Next, an absolutely brilliant exchange between Arthur Dent and Ford Prefect from The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy:

“You know,” said Arthur, “it’s at times like this, when I’m trapped in a Vogon airlock with a man from Betelgeuse, and about to die of asphyxiation in deep space that I really wish I’d listened to what my mother told me when I was young.”

“Why, what did she tell you?”

“I don’t know, I didn’t listen.

Next, an interview Douglas did in 1985 with Letterman.

Advice on Writing Flash Fiction

Advice on Writing Flash Fiction

I’ve been reading a bunch of flash fiction in the past few days, so I thought I’d share some of my observations on what works for me as a reader.

First of all, what is Flash Fiction? To put it simply, flash fiction is just a piece of fiction that is just really short. From Wikipedia:

Flash fiction is a style of fictional literature or fiction of extreme brevity.[1] There is no widely accepted definition of the length of the category. Some self-described markets for flash fiction impose caps as low as three hundred words, while others consider stories as long as a thousand words to be flash fiction

Let’s frame this a bit more. Let’s stick with really short fiction, say 100 to 500 words.

  1. Grab the reader’s attention right away. Flash is meant to be bite sized nuggets of story goodness. Don’t make me choose the other dessert.
  2. Tell me a story. A complete story. Yes this can be done.
  3. Don’t be so nebulous–the reader shouldn’t have to wait until the last sentence to know what the heck is going on.
  4. Show don’t tell. You hear the rule all of the time for a reason. Don’t tell us the protagonist is scared. Paint the picture.
  5. Easy of the flowery prose. Flowery prose can be good, but in flash fiction you only have so many words. There’s no sense in using them all to describe the supporting character’s jacket.
  6. Easy on the murder, rape, violence. There are other ways to create tension and drama. And with so little words to work with, it is really difficult to do murder, rape, violence that doesn’t seem just cheap and gratuitous.
  7. Surprise endings are overdone. Surprise! Those two people you thought were in love were newts the entire time. (I’ve written a bunch of these in my day and they are fun to write, but do feel a little like the easy way out to me now)
  8. Make me feel. A good piece of flash fiction should make me feel happy. Or sad. Or nostalgic. Or anything other than meh.
  9. Seriously, though. Take it easy on the violence.

Anybody else have thoughts on what makes good flash fiction?

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Director : Michael Bay.
Writer : Steven S. DeKnight, Robert Kirkman, Matt Holloway, Art Marcum, Michael Bay, Steven Spielberg, Jeff Pinkner, Zak Penn, Christina Hodson, Lindsey Beer.
Producer : Ian Bryce, Akiva Goldsman, Steven Spielberg, Lorenzo di Bonaventura, Don Murphy.
Release : June 21, 2017
Country : United States of America.
Production Company : Paramount Pictures, Universal Pictures, Hasbro Studios.
Language : English.
Runtime : 149 min.
Genre : Action, Science Fiction, Thriller, Adventure.

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Lego Table Complete!

Lego Table Complete!

I posted this on Facebook and Twitter, but I’m pasting it here for those of you who aren’t Facebook friends with me (sniff), because I promised to post a photo when I finally had finished the Lego coffee table I have been working on the past few months.

Well, here it is, in the living room, complete with Lego plates. There are things I’d change, but overall I’m happy with it. Not too bad for the first piece of furniture I ever built.

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